Above

Below

Above and Below combined. Raw unbleached cotton, mixed media, 3000 mm x 2000 mm

Peer feedback.

Superb photographs again!  I love the energy in your mark making.  The yellow reminds me of sun rays and the undulating circular forms of the blue remind me of the movement/waves in water. I notice you treat the above and below strip as very separate entities with white space in between.  Is there a reason why the two separate worlds don’t meet?  Could each world fill the space and then be stitched together?

You mentioned that you had a go pro.  Does this take photographs from beneath the surface of the water?   I really feel the submerged fabric twisting and turning with the current against weeds would look awesome.

I really love how you have captured the passing to time by documenting the light fading over the lake.  The superb weather has allowed you to create some spectacular photos of your work in situ. It would be interesting to juxtapose these with work submerged in stormy/winter weather. Is this something you’re planning over the coming months?

3m x 2m is an impressive size.  What would happen if you made the fabric the length for example of the rise in water during the flood or the depth of the lake.  Could you make a range of small ones to drag behind a paddle board separated by wire for example, so they looked like a shoal of fish?

The concept you are exploring is so exciting and engaging, well done I love it!